Skyfall

high i am flying free among the cotton clouds
feeling immensely powerful
creating a space for myself among the stars
no wings ,air surround's me like a cool shower,
on a hot summer day
brisk,swimming amid the blue sky of wonder,
with my naked self
I look down at the wide glorious vision of earth
round and exceptionally beautiful from above
our stars Aquarius and Libra together up high
my scales weigh your heart
shining bright i watch the two ,so exhilarating
who are you Aquarius?
I'm looking down and i see the bull stand out from the crowd
A chance to meet my star
A free fall , sky fall i take to you
Air fleeing through my body
faster immersing into the night
My point of happiness far in the distance
but near my heart
I let myself fall ,no wings
closer the enormous passion feels
closer my heart string's are pulled
My sky fall from among the stars 
To my stars arms
Now Aquarius has Libra in his

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Date: 9/25/2013 4:29:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Tina
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Date: 9/24/2013 7:26:00 PM
of course as a libra I loved this piece...nice poem, finely penned, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/24/2013 4:54:00 PM
Tina.......Congrats................. Love~SKAT~
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Date: 9/24/2013 12:07:00 PM
Congrats, Tina. A powerful opening line and great imagery. Well done. Shane
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/24/2013 2:08:00 PM
thanx a million shane pleased you liked it tina x
Date: 9/24/2013 11:33:00 AM
Tina, , :)Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my EPIC contest with this amazing deep imagery. Exactly what I was looking for. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Wartime Memories " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15948&PoetID=18720 always & forever **LINDA
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/24/2013 2:08:00 PM
thanx linda im really pleased my fav poem of mine tina x
Date: 9/15/2013 8:01:00 PM
Hi Tina; Thanks for reading my poem. I wanted to read your first poem as I see that you are new here. Your poem is beautiful. many times I dreamed of touching the stars and be surrounded by them. Welcome to PoetrySoup. .... Lucilla
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/16/2013 12:06:00 PM
lucilla thank you i am loving being here .and thank you for reading into my poetry tina x
Date: 9/15/2013 11:22:00 AM
Dope poem. Aquarius is my sign you know. I like to read magazines and look at my horoscope but that's about it. You have a fine poem here but I'd get rid of some of the apostrophes. Good luck on the Soup...
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/16/2013 12:04:00 PM
ayesha thanks for reading ,i took your advice thank you tina x
Date: 9/14/2013 10:00:00 AM
Tina, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/14/2013 1:31:00 PM
thank you skat i am loving here already ! skyfall is one of my favourites i'm still getting used to the site but will say hello tina x
Date: 9/13/2013 8:14:00 PM
Reminds me of "Free Falling" from Tom Petty. This felt really nice to read. There's a lot of exuberance in these declarations. A rush of solace. Taking that leap for something real. Great job!
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/14/2013 3:43:00 AM
thank you drake im glad you enjoyed tina x
Date: 9/13/2013 11:52:00 AM
thank you anne ! im sure i am going to enjoy being here tina
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Date: 9/13/2013 11:43:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Tina ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 7:53:00 AM
wow.. Tina, I'm Libra, I love this poem. I once loved an Aquarius... WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/13/2013 11:12:00 AM
thank you linda i am just amazed at the site and the many features here wish i found it before ! thank you tina
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