Sky View From the Q E

SKY VIEW FROM THE Q.E.

Dark grey squalls 
glide off of Hamilton Bay
trailing snow
look like old time proper ladies
their dainty booted feet
stirring up a wake
of frothy silken finery.

one behind the other
they file toward the escarpment
dropping crystal lace hankies
in coy consent

“I am approachable”,
the squall ladies whisper
“the hour is late
my mood so melancholy”,
as their cold breath 
caresses the cheek.

a pale sun breaks through
shafts of light reflect 
from delicate flakes of snow
appearing as though 
finest gauze wedding veils
drift to earth

earth sleeps 
awaiting Persephone
time between white velvet comforter
and a lacy leafed wrap
exposes her bones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/16/2017 4:21:00 PM
Wow!!! The most gorgeous penning of snow I have ever read. Your talent glitters prismatic. xomo :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/16/2017 5:09:00 PM
Thanks I have a problem though will mail you about it.
Date: 11/16/2017 2:35:00 PM
This poem rocks, Pat! Got your master poet laureate pen flowing on this one. Pure poetry w/exquisite imagery. Persephone, eh. I feel ya. Such intimately cerebral expressions. Gold star poetry. Love and joy always.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/16/2017 3:15:00 PM
thank you Freddie it was a day like today all greys and damp. Something really beautiful showed it self and I caught it.
Date: 11/15/2017 3:44:00 PM
Wow, wow, wow...if this is not good enough to publish I will eat my hat -- and your slippers as well, Patricia!! My very warmest regards as always. :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/16/2017 3:16:00 PM
John you are ever encouraging. Thank you.
Date: 11/14/2017 10:20:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Patricia.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/14/2017 10:32:00 PM
Thanks line.
Date: 11/14/2017 5:22:00 PM
How very descriptive and beautiful.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/14/2017 5:57:00 PM
Thank you Dale.
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