Sky On Land-Hiku

dawn gleams after night storm
crystal sky flushed...
sun bursts on flower

spring shimmers radiant
hues ripple in breeze...
sunset sky lands

November 22, 2021
Syllable count : Total 15 in each haiku (HMS)
Contest : Hiku (Disciplined Brevity)
Sponsor : William Kekaula
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Chamberlain Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 5:17 AM
Great imagery. I particularly enjoyed the line "hues ripple in breeze". Have a lovely day.
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