Sky Gazing

When a giant fish,

chases the silver ball

thinking it as its dish,

my eyes filled with zeal.

Will it snatch the ball 

or will it relinquish?

Suddenly the wind blows

and the clouds vanish

Still no disappointment
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 6:29 PM
this is so imaginative. Loved how you did your topic with this unique imagery, Supraja!
Callus Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 10:54 AM
I like your original take on sky gazing, Supraja! I enjoy sky gazing, too, and my imagination never leaves me disappointed:) Regards // paul
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