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Sky Flies With Bird's Wings

a genius village
                                    head master also teaches 
                                     says one plus two's four 

                                      there's a dull student
                            wrote one plus two's three and failed
                                       unfit for that school

                                      wrong's right for many
                                drain brain problem what to do?
                                    sky flies with bird's wings

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Jill Spagnola Date: 11/17/2015 2:42:00 PM I'd choose the bird filled sky as well.. what a wondrous way you have with words, BL....:), jill Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 1/10/2016 9:03:00 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment. Sorry for late. Loved always,bl

Skat A Date: 11/7/2015 9:00:00 PM A lovely write. SKAT Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 11/8/2015 8:15:00 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/5/2015 12:11:00 AM and some do not like to be corrected, thank you for the read my dear BL, ~Luv Linda Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 11/8/2015 8:19:00 AM Thanks my *friend for your excellent comment and credit. You have rightly caught the hidden meaning of the poem. This is done out of my own practical experience in day to day dealing with some people. The theme is much broader. Loved always,bl

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/28/2015 7:15:00 PM introspective write in a subtle way, bl...praise be to good mentors unlike this one... huggs Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 10/29/2015 10:16:00 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation with a nice comment. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2015 2:06:00 PM amusing but also sad BL:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 10/28/2015 2:18:00 PM Yes, my lovely friend. Please, don't be serious, but practically happens in political worlds. Smile and laugh ha ha ha....both with cheers. Most of them misguide and innocent people also talk the same language of their tongues, so said a village.You are invited to India to enjoy this nice game. Thanks for your comment. Loved always,bl