Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Sky Flies With Bird's Wings

a genius village
                                    head master also teaches 
                                     says one plus two's four 

                                      there's a dull student
                            wrote one plus two's three and failed
                                       unfit for that school

                                      wrong's right for many
                                drain brain problem what to do?
                                    sky flies with bird's wings

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Jill Spagnola November 17, 2015 at 2:42 PM I'd choose the bird filled sky as well.. what a wondrous way you have with words, BL....:), jill Bl Devnath January 10, 2016 at 9:03 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment. Sorry for late. Loved always,bl

Skat A November 7, 2015 at 9:00 PM A lovely write. SKAT Bl Devnath November 8, 2015 at 8:15 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A November 5, 2015 at 12:11 AM and some do not like to be corrected, thank you for the read my dear BL, ~Luv Linda Bl Devnath November 8, 2015 at 8:19 AM Thanks my *friend for your excellent comment and credit. You have rightly caught the hidden meaning of the poem. This is done out of my own practical experience in day to day dealing with some people. The theme is much broader. Loved always,bl

Nette Onclaud October 28, 2015 at 7:15 PM introspective write in a subtle way, bl...praise be to good mentors unlike this one... huggs Bl Devnath October 29, 2015 at 10:16 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation with a nice comment. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison October 28, 2015 at 2:06 PM amusing but also sad BL:-) hugs Jan xx Bl Devnath October 28, 2015 at 2:18 PM Yes, my lovely friend. Please, don't be serious, but practically happens in political worlds. Smile and laugh ha ha ha....both with cheers. Most of them misguide and innocent people also talk the same language of their tongues, so said a village.You are invited to India to enjoy this nice game. Thanks for your comment. Loved always,bl