Ken Allan Dronsfield Poet Haiku

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Charlieku 4 x 4 x 4 Poetry Contest

4/23/2026

Sponsored by: Charles Messina

Sky and Ocean Blue

Deep blue ocean,
Quiet motion,
So wide and free.

Bright sun above,
Peace like a dove,
A golden light.

Cool evening air,
Soft shadows there,
Night is now near.

Stars in the sky,
Tear in my eye,
The silver glow.

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Kim Rodrigues June 10, 2026 at 7:46 AM Drawn into its peace, nearly with stars in your eyes! Congrats! Ken Allan Dronsfield June 10, 2026 at 8:05 AM Hi Kim, thank you so much for your lovely comment! Have a blessed day!

Andrew Fairchild June 2, 2026 at 2:24 AM I am not familiar with this form, but I love the way it scans. So fresh! So innovative! I am a musician, so I love especially the sound of words. Great job! Ken Allan Dronsfield June 2, 2026 at 11:49 AM Thank you very much Andrew! I'm an old musician (guitarist) that cannot play anymore due to arthritis, but I write music as well as poetry. I think it goes well together! Thank you again, and have a blessed day!

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2026 at 8:31 PM Congrats on your win with this gorgeous poem Ken Allan Dronsfield May 30, 2026 at 10:21 AM Thank you my friend!

Christine Watts May 29, 2026 at 5:27 PM Hi Ken Congratulations on you winning placement with your well written poem A lovely overview Cheers Christine Ken Allan Dronsfield May 29, 2026 at 5:43 PM Hi Christine, thank you so much for your kind words!

Karen Croft May 29, 2026 at 7:08 AM congratulations! Ken Allan Dronsfield May 29, 2026 at 9:53 AM thank you!

Rob Carmack May 29, 2026 at 6:16 AM Congratulations Ken. Ken Allan Dronsfield May 29, 2026 at 9:54 AM Thanks so much Rob!

Terry Miller May 29, 2026 at 5:04 AM Beautifully written for the contest, congratulations Ken Allan Dronsfield May 29, 2026 at 9:54 AM Much appreciated!!

Charles Messina May 29, 2026 at 4:05 AM Beautifully written, Ken. Wonderful imagery! Congratulations on your top win in my contest! Charlie Ken Allan Dronsfield May 29, 2026 at 9:56 AM To say I'm 'thrilled' would be an understatement, Charlie! I'm honored to take home the top prize for this challenging poetry contest! Ken