CayCay Godwin Poet Verse

Sky Aimed Growth

I sense each tree's confident stance
and feel their staunch faith strive
to block all ills mankind rooted
that taint their sky aimed growth.

My soul reels from heartbreak in limbs
though fortitude firmly
determines them heavenly bound 
despite man's selfish ways.




... CayCay

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Eve Roper August 31, 2019 at 10:46 PM CayCay, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2019 at 5:12 PM wow, such profundity in your words, Caycay. I really like your entry . Congrats, my friend.

Paul Callus August 30, 2019 at 7:50 AM Your strength lies in the belief that like a tree, you are capable of digging your heels in without letting yourself be influenced by others' selfishness, CayCay. A beautiful worthy winning entry! Congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud August 30, 2019 at 1:35 AM splendid affirmation of resilience using a tree as your creative handle, cay... so wonderfully penned!... warm congrats as i thank you for taking part in my contest...huggs

Heidi Sands August 29, 2019 at 3:28 PM This is a great poem and I love the ending CayCay :)

Arturo Michael August 28, 2019 at 9:29 AM Despite selfish ways...we're heaven bound...Nice one

Sandra Adams August 27, 2019 at 6:30 PM i have compared myself to trees before, they make for a great metaphor...love the way you penned this one...beautiful my friend :) hugs

Chris Green August 27, 2019 at 2:20 PM Wow, that was amazing. I felt like I was one with a tree as I read that. Indeed, we don;t take care of the things around us that make our world what it is. Beautifully done. Best wishes in the contest. CayCay Godwin August 27, 2019 at 5:24 PM If'n you don't mind, I'm going to embrace your comments for good long while. Thanks for such huggable words, Chris. I wonder if you remember our long ago volleys about my 'wow' jar cause you just contributed another. Really, thank you ... CayCay