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The sky is a world of serenity above the realm of death and darkness where only joy and love are known and paradise lasts forever without any end

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Date: 12/13/2018 6:28:00 PM
Another valuable piece!
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Date: 11/20/2018 12:55:00 PM
This is an interesting form of poetry, Vermillion...so is the content of the poem itself! I wonder if rhyme is also allowed! Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/20/2018 4:22:00 PM
Thank you. That opens up more possibilities...
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Vermillion Scythe
Date: 11/20/2018 12:59:00 PM
Rhyming is most certainly allowed. Personally, I don’t usually rhyme when writing my word vision poems, but you’re right it is allowed.

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