Sky

The sky
is a world of serenity
above the realm of death and darkness
where only joy and love are known
and paradise lasts forever without any end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Talwar Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Another valuable piece!
Callus Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 12:55 PM
This is an interesting form of poetry, Vermillion...so is the content of the poem itself! I wonder if rhyme is also allowed! Regards // paul
Callus Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Thank you. That opens up more possibilities...
Scythe Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 12:59 PM
Rhyming is most certainly allowed. Personally, I don’t usually rhyme when writing my word vision poems, but you’re right it is allowed.
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