Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Skipping Past Daisies

Skipping past daisies

 twirling with ease

smiling at nature

and all that does please

tackling life's worries

with a heart full of grace

answering God's calling

with an angelic face

bathing in jasmine

aged like fine wine

a scent of forever

from beginning of time

rich red cherry blossoms

left with a kiss

flowering a kinship

one cannot dismiss

skipping past daisies

with the soon setting sun

comfort her beauty

 two grow now as one

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Anne-Marie Coreggia June 4, 2017 at 6:31 PM I really enjoyed this lovely romantic poem Tim:) Amitiés

Darren White June 3, 2017 at 8:37 AM I love to dance with you on this beautiful melody, because that is what it is in my mind.

Eileen Manassian June 2, 2017 at 11:31 AM Beautiful, Tim. I love all the special lines you have here. Jasmine, cherry blossoms, daisies...all beautiful symbols. Lovely

Jan Allison June 2, 2017 at 11:19 AM so beautiful and romantic Tim you are such a versatile poet I love reading your work:-) hugs Jan xx

Lenna Walker June 2, 2017 at 9:13 AM Tim, that is flowing and lovely !! I love it :) It starts out sweet, becomes deep and ends romantically... beautiful :)

Heidi Sands June 2, 2017 at 8:44 AM Tim, I just love this one. It reads like music and is so lovely! I would like to keep it as a FAV :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2017 at 6:19 AM - A warm and romantic poem, Tim - Beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Ella June 2, 2017 at 4:09 AM Daisies and cherry blossoms - so pretty and your poem is so romantic, Tim, it is beautiful <3

Daniel Turner June 1, 2017 at 11:33 PM This is very romantic, Tim. It shows the softness of your heart:) Superbly penned!

Arthur Vaso June 1, 2017 at 11:08 PM So heartwarming, I agree with Eve, this was such a lovely write, I liked the line "aged like fine wine"

Eve Roper June 1, 2017 at 9:49 PM Tim, where do you get all these wonderful ideas for your poems? they are very nice! Thank you for another wonderful read.