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Skipping Past Daisies

Skipping past daisies twirling with ease smiling at nature and all that does please tackling life's worries with a heart full of grace answering God's calling with an angelic face bathing in jasmine aged like fine wine a scent of forever from beginning of time rich red cherry blossoms left with a kiss flowering a kinship one cannot dismiss skipping past daisies with the soon setting sun comfort her beauty two grow now as one

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Date: 6/4/2017 6:31:00 PM
I really enjoyed this lovely romantic poem Tim:) Amitiés
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Date: 6/3/2017 8:37:00 AM
I love to dance with you on this beautiful melody, because that is what it is in my mind.
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Date: 6/2/2017 11:31:00 AM
Beautiful, Tim. I love all the special lines you have here. Jasmine, cherry blossoms, daisies...all beautiful symbols. Lovely
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Date: 6/2/2017 11:19:00 AM
so beautiful and romantic Tim you are such a versatile poet I love reading your work:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/2/2017 9:13:00 AM
Tim, that is flowing and lovely !! I love it :) It starts out sweet, becomes deep and ends romantically... beautiful :)
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Date: 6/2/2017 8:44:00 AM
Tim, I just love this one. It reads like music and is so lovely! I would like to keep it as a FAV :)
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Date: 6/2/2017 6:19:00 AM
- A warm and romantic poem, Tim - Beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/2/2017 4:09:00 AM
Daisies and cherry blossoms - so pretty and your poem is so romantic, Tim, it is beautiful <3
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Date: 6/1/2017 11:33:00 PM
This is very romantic, Tim. It shows the softness of your heart:) Superbly penned!
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Date: 6/1/2017 11:08:00 PM
So heartwarming, I agree with Eve, this was such a lovely write, I liked the line "aged like fine wine"
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Date: 6/1/2017 9:49:00 PM
Tim, where do you get all these wonderful ideas for your poems? they are very nice! Thank you for another wonderful read.
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