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Skipping Past Daisies

Skipping past daisies twirling with ease smiling at nature and all that does please tackling life's worries with a heart full of grace answering God's calling with an angelic face bathing in jasmine aged like fine wine a scent of forever from beginning of time rich red cherry blossoms left with a kiss flowering a kinship one cannot dismiss skipping past daisies with the soon setting sun comfort her beauty two grow now as one

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Date: 8/17/2015 12:00:00 PM
Nature will do that for you, Tim. Great title and content. Your images are endearing. I can smell the flowers. Yours in poetry, Darlene
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Date: 8/17/2015 11:45:00 AM
Knew it was going to get romantic... LOL... Great write!
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Date: 10/1/2015 9:11:00 AM
funny lol! But, his poems are so beautiful.
Date: 8/17/2015 11:13:00 AM
Good flow and pleasant sounding poem filled with great imagery exhorting the sights and sounds of love locked within the heart. Emile. #7
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Date: 8/17/2015 10:18:00 AM
Hello dear poet. I must say, there are on occasions, when I have a moment to visit other poets beyond the poets I visit quite often,(which of late is seldom I am sad to say), and when I do, I am certainly pleased when I stumble across your avatar, I have recalled other writes of yours and I certainly find them filled with poetic muse to my likeing sir. This one in particular moves me! For some "raison de'etre" this day is filled with love of progeny! I so love that ! Have a blessed week you and your's Tim....much love, james
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Date: 8/17/2015 8:29:00 AM
You romantic devil, you! You're a real sweetie! LOL
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Date: 8/17/2015 7:55:00 AM
skipping past daises,bathing in jasmine, in the scent of forever and cherry blossoms..Such a beauty is this poem.I so love jasmines,cherries,daises and wine..So I love this..a favourite king of romance.
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Date: 8/17/2015 5:17:00 AM
I just scent the jasmine just by read your beautiful romantic poem, dear Tim!
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:10:00 AM
:) Bathing in jasmine is sweet....Lovely write, Tim. Lovely.
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Date: 8/17/2015 1:17:00 AM
G'day Tim... what a great beat that remains constant throughout. Great job Tim - Lindsay
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Date: 8/17/2015 1:02:00 AM
Wow, this is so deliciously beautiful and sounds like it is enhanced with fine wine. Beauty is definitely in the eyes of the beholder. A definite 7.
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Date: 8/16/2015 10:33:00 PM
Beautiful Tim, all of your poems are so romantic but this one is a real gem! A7
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