Skipped Stone

Just sitting by the water, waiting for you?
Picked up held lovingly, rubbed softly, gripped firmly.
The perfect throw, the perfect flight...SKIP.....SKIP...SKIP
OH what divine circles we made together SKip..SKip...SKip
Momentum slipping taken away by the very beauty we created?
skip...skip..skip
Can this perfect ride be finished?
Sinking now beauty behind me perfection still in my wake.
Gracefully down I go slowly rocking peacefully down down down.
Resting  on the bottom muted light, cold silence..
For a brief time watched the perfection we had created  fan out above me
Perfect circles in perfect unison spread out join till they are no more.
Find me again hold me lovingly wrap your hands around me and lets make 
perfection again.
For I do not like this place I am at. For it is cold,dark, silent.
Find me or I will remain here alone.
Forever remembering the beauty and perfection we had once made.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/4/2012 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Sabastin. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week Sabastin. Love, Carol
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Sabastin Gunner
Date: 11/16/2011 6:18:00 PM
thank you so very much I feel very lucky to have had 2 featured.
Date: 11/16/2011 2:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sabastin
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Sabastin Gunner
Date: 11/16/2011 6:19:00 PM
Thank you DR you guys are to nice on here
Date: 10/11/2011 7:49:00 AM
Sabastin , this one is original , well written with deep feelings . I hope you publish some day with this in the lead. Anne
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Date: 7/17/2011 6:08:00 AM
Like the visual evoked. I love poems written for perspective, and this fits the bill. Thanks!
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