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Skin Deep

--------        SKIN DEEP     --------               

                  Beauty is only skin deep, a saying so old

                    Though, it seems that is where beauty 

                             truly begins to unfold

                          Those criticized for being -------

        Too short, too tall

                            Too fat, too small    
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                                                 Body odor, teeth in disorder

        Body parts in disproportion

                              Facial acne not cured with lotions

                                                   Disheveled hair, clothes in need of repair

                          Many of these people I have known----

         Considered underdogs, oddballs

                             Weird and weak, flowers on the wall

                                                    Lack of self esteem and confidence

       Too different, dark humor sense

                            Look past and through these and you will find

                            as I have found-----

                            Delightful, delicious people !!
                            Unique and special !!
                            Loving and caring !!
                            Daring to be themselves !!
                            Unlike the " beautiful people "
                            Knowing their limitations !!

                            Not trying, or dying, to impress anyone !!
                            Cultivating the real, true beauty !!
                            Deep beneath skin depth !!
                            Helping those with ills needing care !!
                            Not looking in the mirror fixing their hair !!
                            Willingness to do the silliest stuff !!
                            Not caring if their clothes get mussed !!  
                            
                            The most interesting people with lives
                            rich and fascinating !!
                            With beauty oozing with every word
                            and touch and gesture !!
                            These people draw my attention !!
                            To experience their beauty---

                             IS TRULY A THING OF BEAUTY !!!!!
                             BEYOND--- SKIN DEEP--- !!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/1/2017 11:26:00 PM
Ha Ha Awesome!! Stellar write Jeanie, truth abounds xomo
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Jeanie Bennett
Date: 3/2/2017 6:10:00 AM
TY for reading and enjoying Maureen !! ~~ Jeanie ~~
Date: 3/1/2017 8:20:00 AM
Very well depiction of people who are down to earth Jeanie! Enjoyed your thought provoking poem! Che :)
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Jeanie Bennett
Date: 3/1/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thank you Che !! xoxo ~~ Jeanie ~~
Date: 2/28/2017 9:05:00 PM
All very true, but can they juggle??? Congratulations Jeanie, well done...
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Jeanie Bennett
Date: 3/1/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Charlie !! And.. probably a no to the juggling thing !! HAHA !! ~~ Jeanie ~~
Date: 2/28/2017 8:45:00 PM
This was fantastic, the poem, the message and the format of your lines and phrases. What a fantastic piece of writing. Very good my friend.
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Jeanie Bennett
Date: 2/28/2017 8:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris !!--these words are my truth !! ~~ Jeanie ~~
Date: 2/28/2017 8:35:00 PM
Well done poem, Jeanie, and good thoughts. : )
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Jeanie Bennett
Date: 2/28/2017 8:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Doug !!~~ Jeanie ~~

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