Skin Care

She doesn't like her jowls and wattle; 
her wrinkles, crinkles and her mottle.  
She rubs in a lotion 
then applies a potion; 
if a little won't, maybe a lot'll.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Love it! Very clever...E.J.
B.A Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 8:05 AM
hey.. thanks you made me laugh :D and i needed that !!thanks for reading my work ~have a nice day~
Foulk Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 10:33 PM
a very creative Limerick. enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on 1960. and you are probley, but by then i would have been gone many years unless i live to be 118.
Jones Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 10:42 PM
omg... poor thing!
Mehta Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 1:23 PM
Utterly humrous , John
T Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Great limerick!! I have yet to master this art, but you seem to do it wonderfully and effortlessly. I've enjoyed reading your poems today :)
Mantle Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 3:47 AM
Love the limerick, had me lauighing out loud! Thanks for stopping by my work. Best wishes Em :)
Devonshire Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 12:17 AM
LOL reminds me of my nightly facial routine, John. Very funny! Soup mail coming. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 11:35 PM
CUTE end rhymes!
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