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Skiing

Sliding down snow-covered hills keeping the glide going gives thrills in sweet awareness enjoy the grand views in concert with exercise, and inspiring muse nothing better than an escape- just let go of fear great rush of wildness and freedom on a day crystal clear _____________________ January 23, 2023 Poetry/Acrostic/Skiing Copyright Protected, ID 01-1519-677-23 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Skiing sponsor, Julia Ward, Judged 01/25/2023

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Connie Pachecho

Date: 1/27/2023 2:52:00 PM

I agree this is a great poem but I can see you forgot the Compulsory phrase in text - snowy week according to the contest rules. I think it would have fit fine in line 5.

Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2023 5:38:00 AM

Connie, thank you so much for your visit, compliment and comment, yes I messed up, but I still like my poem, and yes, it was my attempt at a hill, lol, blessing, Constance

Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/27/2023 2:55:00 PM

Oh how did I miss that. Your poem is also shaped like a hill ... wow.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/25/2023 7:25:00 AM

A delightful skiing themed Acrostic with lovely rhymes to go with it, Constance. It provides a 'rush' to the reader. I wish I was there on those slopes. ~ Regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2023 1:03:00 PM

Paul, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and comment, blessings, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2023 7:41:00 PM

Lone of the better ones I have seen. So nice, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2023 1:03:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2023 3:03:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page to let me know I placed in your contest. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2023 1:04:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, Constance

Kehinde Kopada

Date: 1/24/2023 5:10:00 AM

Great lines. I love it!

Kehinde Kopada
Date: 1/24/2023 3:04:00 PM

Please, Constance I am having an issue here. I just created an account here on poetry soup. Not a premium member yet but I am finding it hard to submit my poem basically on the categories option. Please how do I go about it. I'll really appreciate your response

Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2023 12:17:00 PM

Kehinde, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, Constance

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/23/2023 11:32:00 AM

Great one! I love the concert line :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2023 12:18:00 PM

Heidi, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, Constance