Jenna Logan Poet Verse

Skiff

SKIFF
blue hull
abandoned

in its twilight days
sailing the sea, no more
sadly, left upon the shore

"the fishing boat of an old salt"



June 6, 2022
Pyramids Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May
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Paula Goldsmith June 18, 2022 at 8:46 AM Congratulations on your win. I love this one. Have a blessed day writing away....................... Jenna Logan June 20, 2022 at 9:17 AM Thank you, kind of you, Paula.

L Milton Hankins June 18, 2022 at 8:34 AM Superb! Congratulations on your first place in Joseph's contest. Good job! Jenna Logan June 20, 2022 at 9:17 AM Thanks, Milt. Me and a slew of others. lol

Unseeking Seeker June 18, 2022 at 8:05 AM Superb imagery, invokes investigative imagination to speculate ~ congrats on your win, Jenna Jenna Logan June 20, 2022 at 9:17 AM Thank you, kindly, sir.

Joseph May June 18, 2022 at 7:06 AM Very nicely penned Jenna, Congrats on your win Jenna Logan June 18, 2022 at 7:09 AM Thank you so much for honoring my poem, Joseph.

Mark Koplin June 7, 2022 at 5:25 AM I love the picture you have chosen, excellent imagery in your poem. Your description leaves the mind thinking about that old boat's adventures on the sea. Jenna Logan June 7, 2022 at 6:55 AM That was my thought about the photo when I saw it, too, Mark. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you!

Caren Krutsinger June 6, 2022 at 11:34 PM I see you winning a contest with this one. Jenna Logan June 7, 2022 at 6:54 AM Thank you, Caren.

Ilene Bauer June 6, 2022 at 1:04 PM wonderfully described, jenna! best of luck in the contest... Jenna Logan June 7, 2022 at 6:54 AM Thanks a lot for your well-wishes, Ilene.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 6, 2022 at 8:57 AM Dearest Jenna, what better treatment to an old skiff than a beautiful poetic harbor? Excellently done! Blessings! Jenna Logan June 6, 2022 at 9:56 AM Thank you very much, Demetrios.

Tom Cunningham June 6, 2022 at 8:34 AM I bet that old skiff could tell many stories. You captured the scene well Jenna. Good luck in the contest. Tom Jenna Logan June 6, 2022 at 9:56 AM Thanks so much, Tom. I wrote a different poem for this contest until, duh me... I realized it had to based on one of the photos provided. The colors of this photo drew me in. I appreciate your kind remarks.