Skiff

SKIFF blue hull abandoned in its twilight days sailing the sea, no more sadly, left upon the shore "the fishing boat of an old salt" June 6, 2022 Pyramids Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May Image #1

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2022 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love this one. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/20/2022 9:17:00 AM

Thank you, kind of you, Paula.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/18/2022 8:34:00 AM

Superb! Congratulations on your first place in Joseph's contest. Good job!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/20/2022 9:17:00 AM

Thanks, Milt. Me and a slew of others. lol

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/18/2022 8:05:00 AM

Superb imagery, invokes investigative imagination to speculate ~ congrats on your win, Jenna

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/20/2022 9:17:00 AM

Thank you, kindly, sir.

Joseph May

Date: 6/18/2022 7:06:00 AM

Very nicely penned Jenna, Congrats on your win

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/18/2022 7:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for honoring my poem, Joseph.

Mark Koplin

Date: 6/7/2022 5:25:00 AM

I love the picture you have chosen, excellent imagery in your poem. Your description leaves the mind thinking about that old boat's adventures on the sea.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/7/2022 6:55:00 AM

That was my thought about the photo when I saw it, too, Mark. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/6/2022 11:34:00 PM

I see you winning a contest with this one.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/7/2022 6:54:00 AM

Thank you, Caren.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/6/2022 1:04:00 PM

wonderfully described, jenna! best of luck in the contest...

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/7/2022 6:54:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your well-wishes, Ilene.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/6/2022 8:57:00 AM

Dearest Jenna, what better treatment to an old skiff than a beautiful poetic harbor? Excellently done! Blessings!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/6/2022 9:56:00 AM

Thank you very much, Demetrios.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/6/2022 8:34:00 AM

I bet that old skiff could tell many stories. You captured the scene well Jenna. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/6/2022 9:56:00 AM

Thanks so much, Tom. I wrote a different poem for this contest until, duh me... I realized it had to based on one of the photos provided. The colors of this photo drew me in. I appreciate your kind remarks.