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Skies Beckon

soft blue skies beckon
            for a flight to be taken
                I see clearly now


Heidi Sands

6/17/21

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2021

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Anna Marie Kaianah

June 29, 2021 at 9:15 PM

Well written. This is one of my favorites for sure! ~Anna

June 30, 2021 at 4:31 AM

I am happy to hear that Anna. Thank you :)

June 29, 2021 at 11:17 AM

Heidi, great haiku, All the best to you~ Warren

June 29, 2021 at 12:40 PM

Thank you Warren. I hope all is well :)

Panagiota Romios

June 20, 2021 at 3:10 PM

Great imagery and haiku, Heidi How are you doing. Pangie.xx

Panagiota Romios

June 27, 2021 at 10:20 AM

After that fall, ouch getting better, thanks. Grandson coming over, he is my teacher on tbe new iPad. Wish I could forward the movie he made on a PC when he was 8" omg. It is fantastic. Pangie xx

June 20, 2021 at 3:20 PM

Thank you Pangie ! I am doing ok. Thanks. How are you? I hope you are enjoying today :)

Brian Sambourne

June 20, 2021 at 2:10 PM

Very fine indeed. There's power in simplicity of poetic form + word choice. Be well. Brian

June 20, 2021 at 2:14 PM

Thank you Brian :)

June 19, 2021 at 11:11 AM

Heidi, Some of my favorite words in life and haiku. -Richard

June 19, 2021 at 11:41 AM

Nice to hear that Richard. Thank you very much. Happy Saturday :)

Richard Lamoureux

June 19, 2021 at 7:47 AM

Simple and perfect. ;0)

June 19, 2021 at 7:59 AM

Thank you Richard. I am happy to hear that :)

June 18, 2021 at 3:24 PM

I hope that flight was taken in spirit. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

June 18, 2021 at 5:05 PM

Thank you Sara. And you are welcome :)

Rama Balasubramanian

June 18, 2021 at 12:30 PM

It is rainy season in India and I feel like doing just what you wrote. Wish I could fly on clouds. Sky is so beautiful to watch.

June 18, 2021 at 2:58 PM

Hi Rama. Thank you for the input. Yes, I love to watch the sky, too. :)

Paula Goldsmith

June 18, 2021 at 10:58 AM

"Beautiful" I wish I was a bird and could fly away. Have a wonderful/blessed day/weekend.................

June 18, 2021 at 11:00 AM

Me too Paula! Thank you very much. I hope you have a nice weekend too :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 17, 2021 at 3:18 PM

Uplifting...dearest, Heidi! Hugs xxx

June 17, 2021 at 3:39 PM

Thank you Demetrios. Hugs :)

June 17, 2021 at 3:09 PM

Inviting skies--well written haiku, Heidi.

June 17, 2021 at 3:39 PM

Yes they are Vijay. Thank you . Your kindness is appreciated :)

June 17, 2021 at 2:22 PM

Lovely image Heidi, when you see those skies you just want to take off. Tom

June 17, 2021 at 2:26 PM

Exactly Tom. The sky is like this here today. Thank you for your visit :)

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