Ski Lessons

Slipping, sliding,
Kicking, gliding -
Iffy my technique.
It's a snowy week.
Never skied before -
Got to do this more...!

written 21st January for Julia's Skiing contest

sportsacrostic

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Linda Alice Fowler

January 25, 2023 at 6:28 AM

Try, try again. Never give up! Congratulations on your win Jack! :)

Harry Horsman

January 24, 2023 at 9:49 PM

Jack, watch those hips of your, doesn't auger well for us oldie, if we fall..All the best Mate...Harry.

Susan Ashley

January 23, 2023 at 6:42 PM

Dear Jack, your acrostic poem is so delightful! I adore the action and admire the enthusiasm. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Jennifer Proxenos

January 22, 2023 at 7:20 AM

Think i'd look like a cartoon character if I ever tried my hand at skiing! Having said i'v always wanted to try. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Christuraj Alex

January 22, 2023 at 12:43 AM

Very beautiful with short, sweet words and rhymes.

Paul Callus

January 22, 2023 at 12:02 AM

Your first short lines are full of confident movement, Jack, and I suspect that you've been taking lessons behind our backs :) :) Always enjoy your style of writing, my friend ~ Regards // paul