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Skeleton Tree At Sunset

Skeleton Tree At Sunset mangled phalanges reach from haunched spectral shoulders death screams at dusk deborah burch © 07/02/2012

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Date: 7/11/2012 6:56:00 AM
LOVE this one!! That last line especially
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:15:00 AM
U painted a grotesque looking image which did great justice to the photo...creepy eerie and all the things a haunted tree emulate....wonderful haiku, Susan...I had something in mind for this contest, but by the time I got home from work to post it, it was closed! So goes it with the fast and furious world of PS contests...lol...luv, gwendolen
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Date: 7/5/2012 7:32:00 PM
this contest gave the skeleton tree a real personality. and every one has something except me. i think it deserved more than haiku. oh! i have one!
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Date: 7/5/2012 12:57:00 PM
this is truly descriptive and well done, deborah.. mine pales in comparison to yours!.. :) huggs
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/5/2012 1:10:00 PM
awwww...you are sooo sweet nette...as always :) love ya, deb...going to see yours...
Date: 7/3/2012 9:32:00 PM
Your poem gives the dead tree an animal-like quality. Admirable.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/4/2012 6:45:00 PM
:) thank you Robert
Date: 7/3/2012 12:03:00 AM
I pray none turn to dust. It was nice to read your poems today Deborah. Peace and blessings.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/4/2012 6:46:00 PM
lol...thank you Steven :)
Date: 7/2/2012 7:39:00 PM
You have taken this to a different level...nice one.Best wishes.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/2/2012 7:53:00 PM
:) thank you sooo much, Kash!! your encouragement means a great deal to me...hope you are well...hugs, love ya , deb
Date: 7/2/2012 7:08:00 PM
Oooo... you give an eerie feeling... I like it... Terry
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/2/2012 7:12:00 PM
LOL!! :) thank you, Terry...love ya, deb
Date: 7/2/2012 6:37:00 PM
This write is spectacularly wondrous my friend! I really loved this incredibly striking poem! I was shivering in the awe of this write! Awesome Work!!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/2/2012 6:44:00 PM
thank you dear Russell sooo very much...you always brighten my day with your kind encouragement...big huggs, hope you are well, love ya , deb