Skeleton Tree

Cracking lifeless limbs.
Casting creepy dark shadows.
Illumined by moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Debole Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 2:54 PM
Hi Marty - Congratulations to you! Like your use of alliteration, and bringing in the imagery of the moon's effect. - Gail
Harrington Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 2:40 PM
Congrats! Enjoyed much. Tanya
A   Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 7:38 PM
Marty, a nice little sweet win, congratulations with hugs~LUV*PD
Ryerson Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 3:52 PM
Great job, Marty and congratulations to you as well - Tim
May Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 9:49 AM
congrats on your win Marty
Grisetti Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
Tsiluma Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 6:47 AM
Congrats on your win Marty! Love the last line!
Williams Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 6:31 AM
Marty congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 5:22 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Nathan's "Skeleton Tree" contest Marty. Love, Carol
Rozario Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Very nice Marty...so far haven't read a bad one for this contest...judging would super tough I think!!! Good luck.
Rozario Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 11:43 AM
*be
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 10:01 PM
An eerie picture, Marty. Me likes!
A   Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 9:23 PM
Marty, wow! good luck in the contest.. always pd
Kendrick Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 5:16 PM
Very creative work for the contest..Reads like a winner..Good luck with your entry...Thanks for stopping by..I am doing good..It is hot here very hot..It was back 108 again today not figuring in the heat index...Sara
Williams Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 5:01 PM
Marty, great haiku, good luck..David
Harrington Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 3:19 PM
Lovely and dark, like this alot. Good luck. Tanya
Poet Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 2:47 PM
Wonderful imagery!Best wishes.
Bourner Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 2:27 PM
Very imaginative write. :) good luck in the contest! ------Ell
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