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knobby tentacles begging an angerly sky dead by lightning bolt ©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins July 5, 2012

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Date: 5/4/2013 10:46:00 AM
Imaginative images in so few words! Terry
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Date: 11/23/2012 3:41:00 PM
LOL, Love this Haiku. This is for me the best Haiku I have ever read. Haiku's don't usually appeal to me but this one is genius. I love it. It will be going in my favorites.
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Date: 7/21/2012 6:47:00 AM
Wow..."knobby tentacles." Have to keep reading after that inviting descriptive line. - Gail
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Date: 7/5/2012 8:45:00 AM
Had a tree fall in the last storm, it really was begging to go, youre absolutely right!
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Date: 7/5/2012 8:37:00 AM
Your style is so engaging! I noticed the assonance you create with 'tentacles begging...dead.' Super job!! Best wishes, Keith :) (PS Good Luck!)
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Date: 7/5/2012 8:29:00 AM
Excellent piece. :) good luck in the contest! ------Ell
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Date: 7/5/2012 7:50:00 AM
Winner material..Good luck..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
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