Skeleton Tree

gnarling branches are grasping up, reaching for rain in hopes to give life
Russell Sivey Entrant into Nathan's "Skeleton Tree (haikus)" contest 7/3/2012
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Onclaud Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 10:41 AM
stupendous weave of words claiming sighs of faith and positive energy, russell... finest entry for the contest; you have my nod!..:) hugggs!
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 8:55 PM
I like how you made yours full of hope, Russell. Just like you, that tree was thinking of others.
Merryman Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 6:47 PM
Nice haiku, Russell. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
Johnson Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 6:30 PM
water coming is it rain, no we are in bloody strife.... onn ya Russell mate..
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 4:59 PM
Winner's list for sure..Enjoyed reading the creative work..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review was uplifting..Sara
Pettit Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Looking for a meager chance to stay alive. Good haiku.
Henderson Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 3:35 PM
Desiring just one drop of dew. Thanks for sharing Russell. Peace and blessings
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