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Skat's Runaway Train

Out of control and down hill fast Wondering if this life will be snuffed out at last Stuck on the rails like an antique car Bumpity, bumpity jerk, jar The scenes are going too fast to focus Was this life just hocus pocus? Tears won't stop the heavy momentum Physics are against us, check the sum Hang on till the end Another life I must lend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/19/2010 3:16:00 AM
love it let it all runaway with us,..p.d
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:51:00 PM
Interesting write on this theme, Doris. Good luck in the contest. And thank you for your comments on my latest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:06:00 PM
Great write...Interesting topic of that "Runaway Train"...Keep the creative pen flowing..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 5/18/2010 1:14:00 PM
Great entry in the contest. Thanks for your comments on my late for the train posting. i've corrected it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:54:00 AM
Great write, Doris. Good luck. xxxRalph
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