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02/23/ 25

 

 

 

Skating Upon Saturns Rings

   I will skate upon Saturn Rings
   on icy and rocky fragments :
   New excitement and charms to bring
   splendid thrills and entertainment.

     On icy grains  I may gallop.
    I am to slide on rocky mass
    If needed, I will roll and hop,
    yet taking caution not to rush.
 
    Wish, Jack Frost to accompany
    and also to call all my friends,
    may be few or may be many
    to enjoy from the start to end.

      I hope, we will be not at stake.
      All will run frolic under sun
      to skate slow or fast without break.
      The participants must have fun.
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