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For contest by Sara Jama

Skating Upon Saturns Rings

The thought of you makes my heart sing
You inspire a fire with yellow joy you bring
And I can dandelion dream do anything 
Even esteem skating upon Saturns rings

If love is a timeless black hole
I’d be hopelessly consumed 
Left my planet of silver soul
To space travel with you

Not knowing the sky
Is not as big as our love
Time can’t fly or divide
What universe has for us

Anything you ask of me
Will get a cranberry reply
Anything you want baby
For you set my star on fire

I find delight in the night
And safety displays in day
For a body’s last delight
Engage you in a new way

Galaxy sings a song of peace
And you mentally take me there
Words fall like candy confetti 
Stars shine in your heavenly hair

We are one in spiritual bliss
There is a symphony of harmony
There is a unique mind kiss
As you teleport your love to me

I am ready to emerald explore
Wherever we may travel to
For love is a planet I adore 
A pleasure to explore with you
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Mckeithan Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 4:14 PM
Hello Karen, wonderful poem for the contest. Full of vivid imagery.
Jones Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 4:40 PM
Thanks for reading Oliver!
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