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For contest by Sara Jama

The thought of you makes my heart sing You inspire a fire with yellow joy you bring And I can dandelion dream do anything Even esteem skating upon Saturns rings If love is a timeless black hole I’d be hopelessly consumed Left my planet of silver soul To space travel with you Not knowing the sky Is not as big as our love Time can’t fly or divide What universe has for us Anything you ask of me Will get a cranberry reply Anything you want baby For you set my star on fire I find delight in the night And safety displays in day For a body’s last delight Engage you in a new way Galaxy sings a song of peace And you mentally take me there Words fall like candy confetti Stars shine in your heavenly hair We are one in spiritual bliss There is a symphony of harmony There is a unique mind kiss As you teleport your love to me I am ready to emerald explore Wherever we may travel to For love is a planet I adore A pleasure to explore with you

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Date: 2/22/2025 4:14:00 PM
Hello Karen, wonderful poem for the contest. Full of vivid imagery.
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Date: 2/22/2025 4:40:00 PM
Thanks for reading Oliver!

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