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Skating Upon Saturn's Rings

In cosmic wilderness icy rings swirl with frozen rock dust in thin ribbons on flight in solar system unique, around the sleeping Saturn far, as it’s leftover wandering waste, making the breathtaking celestial rinks where I as cosmonaut shall one day glide, skate upon the congealed space tracks vast in freedom of weightless milieu, whirl charmed in galactic glow. As the stardust swathes me I’ll take spiral turns, primal silence will flood me in false dream.

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Date: 2/25/2025 8:07:00 AM
This is beautiful and dreamy how youv written your double etheree, i love this form and youve written one that fits the prompt theme so well in such a cosmically pleasing manner! I love especially the ending , brilliant! Congratulations on your win. Pleasure reading this . Sending you light
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/26/2025 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much for your read and wonderful comments that encourage me very much. Congratulations on your great win with a lovely poem on the theme.

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