Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Etheree

Skating Upon Saturn's Rings

In
cosmic
wilderness
icy rings swirl
with frozen rock dust
in thin ribbons on flight
in solar system unique,
around the sleeping Saturn far,
as it’s leftover wandering waste,
making the breathtaking celestial rinks
where I as cosmonaut shall one day glide,
skate upon the congealed space tracks vast
in freedom of weightless milieu,
whirl charmed in galactic glow.
As the stardust swathes me
I’ll take spiral turns,
primal silence
will flood me
in false
dream.

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Ink Empress February 25, 2025 at 8:07 AM This is beautiful and dreamy how youv written your double etheree, i love this form and youve written one that fits the prompt theme so well in such a cosmically pleasing manner! I love especially the ending , brilliant! Congratulations on your win. Pleasure reading this . Sending you light Subimal Sinha-Roy February 26, 2025 at 8:25 AM Thank you so much for your read and wonderful comments that encourage me very much. Congratulations on your great win with a lovely poem on the theme.