* * * * * * * planets psyches whilst Saturn’s in Pisces the end of a long journey awaits through the cycles of life she skates aboard water ice of Saturn’s fragile rings * spun out of control, fans gossamer wings BECOMING * ———* AN ——*— ENTANGLED — *— — WEB, * WHENEVER — * SHE — STARTS — TO —* — STRAY — * a--pivoting--death--spiral--a--backward lay * afraid in orbit to show a little discipline * she performs an axel, with precision * time to let go of the toxicity, it is * skate or die h a r m o n i c i t y * welcoming in challenges of a new age * * * * * *
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