SKATING UPON SATURN RING
We begin with the history of what life can bring;
my history began with skating upon Saturn’s rings.
It was such an enjoyable and difficult feat;
I skated and danced while drifting on my feet.
I then felt the intensity of those icy rings;
my legs began to swerve from the pressure it brings.
As I began to fall, thinking, “This is insanity!”
No more questions—I began to use profanity.
Skating on the rings of Saturn was such an adventure;
I began to wake from my dream filled with excitement and wonder.
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