Sizzling Summer

Sizzling Summer

Heat hotter than breath.
Gasps squelched while sweat tickles skin,
Flop under the fan.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Jeralynn. Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 9:23 PM
This could be my house at anytime in the summer months. Great write. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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June 19, 2010 at 5:07 PM
sounds beyond HOT. Congrats on your win, Jeralynn. LUv, Andrea
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June 19, 2010 at 1:37 PM
Nice use of alliteration and imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 9:00 PM
Congrats Jeralynn on your success in my contest with your great entry.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 9:11 PM
A wonderful thought with nice images. Good luck in the contest
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June 13, 2010 at 8:45 PM
As a kid without air conditioning, I remember flopping by those fans. Nice use of imagery. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Karen
Johnson Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 5:40 PM
Great one with the required surprise ending. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
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