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Sizzling Summer

Sizzling Summer Heat hotter than breath. Gasps squelched while sweat tickles skin, Flop under the fan.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Jeralynn. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/20/2010 9:23:00 PM

This could be my house at anytime in the summer months. Great write. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2010 5:07:00 PM

sounds beyond HOT. Congrats on your win, Jeralynn. LUv, Andrea

Date: 6/19/2010 1:37:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration and imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 9:00:00 PM

Congrats Jeralynn on your success in my contest with your great entry.. also appreciate your support of my contests.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/13/2010 9:11:00 PM

A wonderful thought with nice images. Good luck in the contest

Date: 6/13/2010 8:45:00 PM

As a kid without air conditioning, I remember flopping by those fans. Nice use of imagery. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/13/2010 5:40:00 PM

Great one with the required surprise ending. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce