Sizzled

A call unexpected A voice so bold A speech so engaging Sizzled, I was sizzled An intellectual An unchallenged persona An uninhibited character Sizzled, I was sizzled I raised my eyebrow I stopped my painting I smiled, ever so slowly... Sizzled, I was sizzled

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Khalai Jimase

Date: 5/28/2014 4:18:00 PM

T!ank you all for the very warm welcome and thank you for the encouraging comments!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2014 6:09:00 AM

Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/16/2014 4:18:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Khalai. Hope you find much support here as you get acquainted. Comment on others poetry and they will return the favor. Best wishes.

Skat A

Date: 5/15/2014 9:01:00 AM

KHALAI, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2014 3:54:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Khalai :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2014 10:53:00 AM

Hello Khalai, a cute poem, sizzling.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

James Hyler

Date: 5/14/2014 9:51:00 AM

Thank you for sharing:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/14/2014 9:02:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup Khalai. I truly enjoyed this poem. Will be back to see what else you might present us to read. Excellent. Love, Carol