Sixty

My heart felt heavy when I saw your picture. A beautiful pixie even still as we get older. What should have been and what will never be. And time to dream about you in eternity. What is my name, I cannot speak. Months go past and I feel so weak. That's how I felt back when I was young, Unable to make my stand or feel strong. A beautiful woman turned sixty today. I wish I was there to give her a hug. And say to her maybe we might take a walk.

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/10/2015 10:05:00 PM

beautiful :)

Gregg Beaty
Date: 8/11/2015 6:55:00 PM

Thanks.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/8/2015 7:17:00 PM

Gregg, very vulnerable poem.. soft are the lines but heady is the message.. emotional but very effective!~Olive Eloisa.. =')

Gregg Beaty
Date: 8/8/2015 7:38:00 PM

Thank you Olive.

Skat A

Date: 8/4/2015 9:24:00 PM

Gregg, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**

Gregg Beaty
Date: 8/6/2015 7:22:00 PM

Thanks Skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/26/2015 10:16:00 PM

Saw Tooth, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Gregg Beaty
Date: 7/27/2015 9:32:00 AM

Linda, Thanks for welcoming me. I hope to add more as time goes on. I have a handful in the works, but the first couple may be very personal.

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 1:42:00 PM

Gregg, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT