Sixth Sense Seduction

SIXTH SENSE SEDUCTION

In ordinary ways
in ordinary days
I stand before her quite amazed
at her lithe form.

While reaching up to touch a cloud
with naked limbs (it’s all allowed)
Her beauty strikes though not to lure; 
to transform me of that I'm sure.

I hear the whispered wind blow through...
to once again say its adieu
...in delicate sound, so very crisp
upon this newly blossomed tryst
like falling leaves that gently touch
a waiting heart.

While still in trance of blessed bliss
I knew that a presumptive kiss
would end this convocation.

And so in silly awkward glee  
and truly thinking it was not me
I could not I resist; oh won't you see?
It was not wrong to hug that tree.

CAK 2-14-2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Ruebel Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 3:34 PM
Oh Wow, I truly love love love this one. You captured me and the final lines are so funny and I might add witty. Your poems are beautiful and I look forward to reading more and more. Lov, Shar
Koven Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Shar, you are so sweet. Thank you. Allan
Kithinji Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:12 PM
...leaves that gently touch a waiting heart... Cerebral!
That Archaic Poet Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Yet another delightful piece, Allan. I see why it was featured. Trust me, I am not pandering to your poetic ego lol You can count me as a fan of your work! :)
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:54 AM
- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Allan. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Koven Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 4:13 PM
One of first I ever wrote. Seems it still resonates. Thanks for responding, Anne Lise Andresen. Great to hear from you. Allan
A   Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 7:09 AM
Good morning Allan, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda
Koven Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 9:38 AM
Love hearing from you, Linda. You know how much I admire your poetry. Allan
Musgrave Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Nice and playful. I thought it was a very fun read.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 10:43 AM
Nice one xx
Harper Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 9:14 PM
Allan, lovely seduction, enjoyed it.
Gregory Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 9:58 AM
....this was so good. Thanks for bringing a smile to me! Z
Koven Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 10:04 AM
Thank you for reading. Hope to read your poetry soon. Allan
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace