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Sixteen Days

days that brought me to worship sounds of deity echoing through my room music that deftly captured my ears and dreams all we needed to release the discomfort of war and plastic cages was the experience of his Fender Strat the feedback from that Marshall amp her Big Momma Thornton howls Ball and Chain, Ball and Chain long may we love the real s--- left behind abstractions melodically rhythmic to rock these tracks take me to that door where I pray someone will answer let me enter the blues of their world and see why such beauty had to end

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Date: 3/30/2019 8:08:00 PM
I like this, it flows with a pattern of irregular pulses... < was a strum across that Fender Strat > :-) Mature visuals and no capitals or punctuation. Excellent!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 4/22/2019 9:47:00 PM
Thanks Thresha. I listen to their music quite often. Jimi and Janis are in my bloodstream you know. Thanks again...……….peace!

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