Six Young Men

Lonely soldiers, far from home, fighting for a way of life that is the only way they 
have 
known. Maybe it is wrong but it is wrong to their thinking to have others push their 
ideals 
into a life that is not your own. The young soldiers will fight for their freedoms to the 
death...

Solid granite stone, bear above the ground, marking a spot along the wire road that 
will 
become a place called The Rock, Georgia. A little known battle raged there in the 
civil  war.
The soldiers decided their freedom had to be now, love beckoned the boys to their 
homes 
and sweethearts. Their lives ended at The Rock, execution style, fighting to go 
home. 
Abandoning their arms, to return to home and the ones who mattered most. War 
has their 
blood spread on The rock, and six simple unmarked graves along the road, 
forgotten...

Ideals lost, lives lost, love lost, forgotten graves of earth, in the shade of the oak 
tree.


This is about CSA graves at The Rock, Ga, that is all that is real, the rest is fiction.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
December 31, 2009 at 4:50 AM
It was all to real Doris, I see no Fiction here at all. My Two days of Hell tells the same story, just another location...Such loss....Well done here for a tribute to Six Young Men....God Bless....Taz
Shango Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 10:44 AM
Fiction is the fence of truth ... may your imagination ever blooms.
Dufresne Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 4:54 PM
War is never a pretty picture wherever and we must always remember. Thanks for the reminder, Doris
Loveless Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 11:11 AM
I like this....perhaps one day ill stop there on my trips...id like to sit beneath one of the trees left there, and find my inspiration in the blood soaked earth.
Fraser Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 7:25 AM
Kool piece Doris >> James
Brown Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 12:52 PM
Very interesting poetry you have posted today Doris. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Owens Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 10:13 PM
Nice write...enjoyed..Marty
Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 3:38 PM
Very informative to me who has lived here all my life and have not stopped there to read the placque. Keep the informative pen flowing. Mom Soup Mail
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