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. Abortion survivor cries. Her mom died.

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/17/2010 10:14:00 AM

A wonderful write. A big hit in the face with profounding thought. Caryl

Elaine George

Date: 1/15/2010 6:31:00 AM

POWERFUL!!!!! Lainie

Miriam Mccue

Date: 1/11/2010 2:06:00 PM

You are a smart cookie, Bob

Miriam Mccue

Date: 1/3/2010 6:57:00 PM

shocking to me.. never thought of that idea, but I guess it happens, 'cause there are suvivors.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/2/2010 8:00:00 AM

oh wow...and the tables are turned--a powerfully written piece, can't help but get the chills with this one...

Cecil Hickman

Date: 1/1/2010 8:46:00 PM

truly saddening and written in such few words so preciously well,,Great job,,and Thank you for your comments after reading my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/29/2009 2:49:00 PM

Powerful poignant write here Robert in so few words.Having been a teen mom I can honestly say that abortion never crossed my mind. Good luck in the contest....thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your always kind words of empathy,understanding and encouragement! All is very much appreciated! Have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/22/2009 6:42:00 PM

This brings back a terrible story I heard from another nurse, She worked in an abortion clinic and some of the babies came out alive and the doctor would not help them. I still think about this and wonder if it can be true.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/22/2009 5:29:00 PM

Powerful words Robert .. and powerful entry for Raul's contest if this is it... good luck .. this is a thought provoking mind burner and deeply touching ... always enjoy your poetry... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/22/2009 3:26:00 PM

That is an impressive six word write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Good luck in the contest. Sara

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/22/2009 4:53:00 AM

Two thumbs up for this one....Though I detest abortion.... Shows it can go both ways...Nicely done, Good luck in the contest....See you there....Taz

Brian Strand

Date: 12/22/2009 1:11:00 AM

Much emotion in this story Robert.Best wishes with it in th contest.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 12/21/2009 5:31:00 PM

Strong words Robert! Irony at it's best! Jeralynn

Date: 12/21/2009 12:56:00 PM

Such a sad tale. Thought provoking too. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/21/2009 6:57:00 AM

whoa! Robert this is a headliner! Great job. You know, I am still working on my first Epigram..I find it challenging! Plus there're so many distractions!! Good luck in the contest! Thank you so much for your kind comments. I truly mean what I write and I do send you my very best wishes for Christmas and a Happy 2010! Hugs..Audrey