Six Words

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          Abortion survivor cries. Her mom died.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Muzzey Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 10:14 AM
A wonderful write. A big hit in the face with profounding thought. Caryl
George   Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 6:31 AM
POWERFUL!!!!! Lainie
Mccue Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 2:06 PM
You are a smart cookie, Bob
Mccue Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 6:57 PM
shocking to me.. never thought of that idea, but I guess it happens, 'cause there are suvivors.
K. Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 8:00 AM
oh wow...and the tables are turned--a powerfully written piece, can't help but get the chills with this one...
Hickman Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 8:46 PM
truly saddening and written in such few words so preciously well,,Great job,,and Thank you for your comments after reading my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 2:49 PM
Powerful poignant write here Robert in so few words.Having been a teen mom I can honestly say that abortion never crossed my mind. Good luck in the contest....thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your always kind words of empathy,understanding and encouragement! All is very much appreciated! Have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary
Culverhouse Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 6:42 PM
This brings back a terrible story I heard from another nurse, She worked in an abortion clinic and some of the babies came out alive and the doctor would not help them. I still think about this and wonder if it can be true.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 5:29 PM
Powerful words Robert .. and powerful entry for Raul's contest if this is it... good luck .. this is a thought provoking mind burner and deeply touching ... always enjoy your poetry... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Kendrick Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 3:26 PM
That is an impressive six word write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Good luck in the contest. Sara
Pickett Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 4:53 AM
Two thumbs up for this one....Though I detest abortion.... Shows it can go both ways...Nicely done, Good luck in the contest....See you there....Taz
Strand Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 1:11 AM
Much emotion in this story Robert.Best wishes with it in th contest.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today
Clark Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 5:31 PM
Strong words Robert! Irony at it's best! Jeralynn
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December 21, 2009 at 12:56 PM
Such a sad tale. Thought provoking too. Good luck in the contest. Karen
Haick Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 6:57 AM
whoa! Robert this is a headliner! Great job. You know, I am still working on my first Epigram..I find it challenging! Plus there're so many distractions!! Good luck in the contest! Thank you so much for your kind comments. I truly mean what I write and I do send you my very best wishes for Christmas and a Happy 2010! Hugs..Audrey
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