Six Pack To Go

SIX PACK TO GO     
Show me a boxcar with an open door,
give me a six pack to go.
I don't need the good life hangin round no more,
give me a six pack to go.

Show me a freight train that's about to leave
give me a six pack to go;
I don't need the good life, tuggin at my sleeve,
I just need a six pack to go.

I don't need no brand new, shiny Cadillac,
I don't need a girl unless she's layin on her back,
when my maker calls me, from this life I know,
I don't wanta leave 'less I got a six pack to go.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 15, 2012 at 1:19 PM
Reminds me of the Hank Thompson song that shares the same title. Good wording and rhyming here.
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