John Lawless Poet Other

Six Ducks

Six ducks
     W A D D L E D
Past
          The    empty
                           Beer cans

One tipped over
                      Quacking
                                            U  P

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Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2026 at 7:32 AM Thanks for the laugh. I needed it. Have a fun day writing away............ John Lawless February 17, 2026 at 4:24 PM glad you enjoyed it Paula...

Victor Buhagiar February 17, 2026 at 5:55 AM Apart the humor, this is very imaginative. John Lawless February 17, 2026 at 4:23 PM thanks Victor, always nice to hear from you.

Gershon Wolf February 16, 2026 at 8:07 PM Tricky, tricky. Ever-clever. ~ gw John Lawless February 17, 2026 at 4:22 PM even in nearer temps and wind the ducks are still here...and so are the beer cans....