Sitting With the Moon

I will sit on the porch, with the August moon
      The old swing sways, with a sleepy croon
         ... softly humming to make me smile                                *
                        In soothing rhythm, all the while
                            while shadowed moonlight knows our tune

A lonely owl, and then a lark,
    calls out to me, within the dark
          Starlight glistens, this peaceful night,
                      while the moon and I,  together, listen                                   *

How softly evening whispers twirl, and stir the branches in the breeze
   The falling leaves around me curl,
                            to fall asleep beneath the trees

I'll make a wish, and close my eyes
          and drink the splendid moonlit night

            I will sit with the moon for awhile....
                 while keeping me company, with its gentle light....

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Nance Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 5:11 PM
Glad to see this on the winners list! I just love your writes :) hugs!
Onclaud Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 10:31 PM
you lullaby my evenings with this precious write, carrie.. a real top-grosser.. my bestest congrats!.. huggs
Arowolo Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 12:40 PM
Amazing piece,Carrie...Congrats on your lovely win...
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 11:33 PM
Loved drinking of moonlit night Carrie! Awesome write n so is the win, big congrats!
May Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Lovely write ...Congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:10 PM
Congratulations, Carrie. To me this is very lyrical sounding and it had a lot of rhyme inside it as well. So it is like a cross between free and metered poetry for me. I just love it. Really sets the tone and in a smooth glide.
Chutani Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:34 PM
you, moon, peace, bliss, no craving for more, a state of nirvana where you feel every inch of nature, divine, in you. marvelous feeling, Carrie. Congrats, Mohan
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:49 PM
Prodigious winner..Way to go..Sara Creative layout....
Guzzi Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:20 PM
Hey if David's coming I'm coming too we like assam tea please! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Merritt Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Carrie, congratulations ! I feel as if I am sitting on the front porch immersed in the moment described while reading this beautiful piece. A great work of art !
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:35 PM
simply stunning imagery Carrie you painted a wonderful picture. many congrats. Hugs jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations Carrie. I enjoyed reading this lovely poem. I felt like I was watching you on that swing.
Roberts Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 12:43 PM
congrats Carrie on making the winners list in my contest, its beautiful
Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 11:33 AM
Carrie congrats on your win, move over I am on my way...David
Courtney Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 7:33 PM
great work
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carrie. Love, Carol
Grisetti Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Beautifully tranquil poem. Congrats on your win.
Gangabissoon Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Beautiful write! Congrats on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 8:06 AM
congrats Carrie on a wonderful winning poem luv..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:28 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie xx
Foster Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 6:56 AM
Carrie, the imagery of this piece is truly captivating, deliverd in in soothing tones. It is indeed a pleasure to have read this gem for you.It is a favorite for this reader.Thank you for sharing :-) God Bless, Always, Adell
Goff Avatar
September 27, 2009 at 4:32 PM
mmm...sitting with the moon! truly a Carrie Richards Classic!...my new fav! I keep reading this over and over!....music just cushions my heart with this fine poem! Carrie! and congrats on your deserved win in Deb's contest!...jim
Pickett Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 11:52 AM
Beautiful visions in this write.... Can I join you in this moment?........:JP]
Chircop Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 8:26 AM
very sweet write indeed Carrie--Charma
Strand Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Sounds idyllic Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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