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Sitting With the Moon

I will sit on the porch, with the August moon The old swing sways, with a sleepy croon ... softly humming to make me smile * In soothing rhythm, all the while while shadowed moonlight knows our tune A lonely owl, and then a lark, calls out to me, within the dark Starlight glistens, this peaceful night, while the moon and I, together, listen * How softly evening whispers twirl, and stir the branches in the breeze The falling leaves around me curl, to fall asleep beneath the trees I'll make a wish, and close my eyes and drink the splendid moonlit night I will sit with the moon for awhile.... while keeping me company, with its gentle light.... * * * *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/3/2014 5:11:00 PM
Glad to see this on the winners list! I just love your writes :) hugs!
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Date: 8/31/2014 10:31:00 PM
you lullaby my evenings with this precious write, carrie.. a real top-grosser.. my bestest congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 8/31/2014 12:40:00 PM
Amazing piece,Carrie...Congrats on your lovely win...
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Date: 8/30/2014 11:33:00 PM
Loved drinking of moonlit night Carrie! Awesome write n so is the win, big congrats!
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Date: 8/30/2014 9:32:00 PM
Lovely write ...Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/30/2014 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie. To me this is very lyrical sounding and it had a lot of rhyme inside it as well. So it is like a cross between free and metered poetry for me. I just love it. Really sets the tone and in a smooth glide.
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Date: 8/30/2014 7:34:00 PM
you, moon, peace, bliss, no craving for more, a state of nirvana where you feel every inch of nature, divine, in you. marvelous feeling, Carrie. Congrats, Mohan
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:49:00 PM
Prodigious winner..Way to go..Sara Creative layout....
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:20:00 PM
Hey if David's coming I'm coming too we like assam tea please! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/30/2014 3:09:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations ! I feel as if I am sitting on the front porch immersed in the moment described while reading this beautiful piece. A great work of art !
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Date: 8/30/2014 1:35:00 PM
simply stunning imagery Carrie you painted a wonderful picture. many congrats. Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. I enjoyed reading this lovely poem. I felt like I was watching you on that swing.
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:43:00 PM
congrats Carrie on making the winners list in my contest, its beautiful
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:33:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win, move over I am on my way...David
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Date: 6/28/2012 7:33:00 PM
great work
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Date: 6/27/2012 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2012 10:01:00 AM
Beautifully tranquil poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/27/2012 8:44:00 AM
Beautiful write! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/27/2012 8:06:00 AM
congrats Carrie on a wonderful winning poem luv..
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Date: 6/27/2012 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie xx
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Date: 10/1/2009 6:56:00 AM
Carrie, the imagery of this piece is truly captivating, deliverd in in soothing tones. It is indeed a pleasure to have read this gem for you.It is a favorite for this reader.Thank you for sharing :-) God Bless, Always, Adell
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Date: 9/27/2009 4:32:00 PM
mmm...sitting with the moon! truly a Carrie Richards Classic!...my new fav! I keep reading this over and over!....music just cushions my heart with this fine poem! Carrie! and congrats on your deserved win in Deb's contest!...jim
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Date: 9/26/2009 11:52:00 AM
Beautiful visions in this write.... Can I join you in this moment?........:JP]
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Date: 9/26/2009 8:26:00 AM
very sweet write indeed Carrie--Charma
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Date: 9/26/2009 8:22:00 AM
Sounds idyllic Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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