sitting outside oak park mall
I am sitting outside Oak Park Mall
shoppers come in with bags
shoppers go out with bags
I watch them maneuver those bags in both directions
they all seem to be in a hurry
hurry in
hurry out
no one notices me
I am invisible
it is a powerful feeling
I continue to watch
I could do this all day
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