Sitting On Your Bed

Now you know my weakness
My vulnerability
I feel theres a completeness
In my reality

We're the knot in a string
Standout is what we do
Its the funniest thing
This feeling I have for you

So many things we've said
So many things we've done
As we sit on your bed
You shine like the sun

Nothing but warm
Is what I feel
For you I could transform
My heart is what I reveal

For you are the light
That shines on my day
With you I take flight
From you I'll never stray

Even though i may not show it all the time
Every word in this poem is the truth
It's the only thing that i know truly sublime
And i know this despite my youth

I work through the hours
With the thought in my mind
Of when the moment can be ours
This moment never declined

I always want to be with you
And i dont mind your friends
Because it's just us two
Until this life ends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/5/2010 1:54:00 PM
Beautifully written, Cody! I hope you share this with her! Be happy! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/5/2010 10:58:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Cody. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2010 10:18:00 PM
Cody, this one is a very warm enjoyable poem too. Nice to see you tonight! andrea
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Date: 1/4/2010 5:07:00 PM
Romanticism at its best Cody, nice work...Raul
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