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Sitting On Your Bed

Now you know my weakness My vulnerability I feel theres a completeness In my reality We're the knot in a string Standout is what we do Its the funniest thing This feeling I have for you So many things we've said So many things we've done As we sit on your bed You shine like the sun Nothing but warm Is what I feel For you I could transform My heart is what I reveal For you are the light That shines on my day With you I take flight From you I'll never stray Even though i may not show it all the time Every word in this poem is the truth It's the only thing that i know truly sublime And i know this despite my youth I work through the hours With the thought in my mind Of when the moment can be ours This moment never declined I always want to be with you And i dont mind your friends Because it's just us two Until this life ends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/5/2010 1:54:00 PM
Beautifully written, Cody! I hope you share this with her! Be happy! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/5/2010 10:58:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Cody. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2010 10:18:00 PM
Cody, this one is a very warm enjoyable poem too. Nice to see you tonight! andrea
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Date: 1/4/2010 5:07:00 PM
Romanticism at its best Cody, nice work...Raul
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