Sitting On the Veranda

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Awesome panoramic scene Balanced sounds from nature rush, touch my spirit Cleansed soon will be the trees of rustling leaves Dawn will awaken with a purple horizon Earth will seem defeated with no life, then Spring

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2017 8:08:00 PM

I see from comments below that it IS your scene. For some reason I was picturing fields like on a farm for where you lived!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/1/2017 1:16:00 PM

Andrea, Thanks so much for the two comments..I have sent you some pictures via email..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2017 8:07:00 PM

Is this maybe what you see when you are looking from your house? I pictured your place a different way but this scene looks very much like the scene from my sister's house in Arkansas, which is not too far from your state!! I enjoyed this,SAra

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/1/2017 12:27:00 PM

Andrea, This poem is about the changing of the seasons but I was influenced by the view from my porch..I don't get out much any more..I need to change my lifestyle so that I can have my few minutes in the morning with mother nature and my commune with God..Thanks for the comments..I will try to send you a few pictures taken from my porch..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/30/2017 1:34:00 PM

-I see you have two chairs ... I would like to sit by your side to enjoy this beautiful view, Sara - Lovely weekend - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/30/2017 4:54:00 PM

SS, There are several chair out on the porch but the leaves haven't reached good color yet and I have no idea what they will do this year..They seem to be crackly and dry even though we have had some rain this fall..We will see what Mother Nature offers..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/30/2017 11:45:00 AM

Lovely scene from your veranda Sara--sounds peaceful and hopeful of a new Spring!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/30/2017 4:53:00 PM

Vijay, Thanks for the lovely comment..I am sure that I will be wanting spring in a few months because the cold will be hard on me..Sara

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 9/30/2017 11:24:00 AM

I happen to like this poem. It is fresh and direct.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/30/2017 12:08:00 PM

Dale, Your presence at my work is encouraging..Thanks for dropping by...I have a contest going using this form with any theme..I hope that you will write one for the contest..Sara