Sitting On the Swing

laughing a joyous laugh
a giggle escapes my mouth's path
swinging on this swing i do
another swing here by you
with the sky as dark as my mother's hair
playing here then playing there
with one small swing takes another flight
im here with you on this wonderful night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 4:04 AM
I used to love closing my eyes on the swing, what a feeling of freedom that was, nice poem Faire>>James
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April 20, 2009 at 5:03 PM
sounds like a nice place to be. john h loving iii
Christian Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 9:55 AM
aww a sweet poem, I say we neevr to old to play on the swings LOL I still do from time to time, its great see who can get the highest, so much fun, weeeeeeee LOL God bless you from diane
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