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Sitting On the Fence

I was sitting on the fence When you were passing I thought I could get to you When you were smiling But it seems you are far away From my love I was charmed by your moves As you were walking I thought I could feel the love In you But as you walked and passed me My world became empty I was sitting on the fence Watching you disappear With a love waiting by the corner I cried out my heart Cause I lost you to another forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/3/2016 11:05:00 PM
Don, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/21/2016 7:08:00 AM
Great work of poetry. Checkout Don El Yudo's complete anthology titled "Love Cry" published in amazon createspace & kindle.
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Date: 1/21/2016 7:06:00 AM
Great work of poetry. Checkout Don El Yudo's complete anthology titled "Love Cry" published in amazon createspace & kindle.
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Date: 1/12/2016 12:09:00 PM
wow, this is a great poem... Love it.... SKAT ...
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Date: 6/15/2011 6:20:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Don. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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