Don El Yudo Poet Sonnet

Sitting On the Fence

I was sitting on the fence
When you were passing
I thought I could get to you
When you were smiling
But it seems you are far away
From my love

I was charmed by your moves
As you were walking
I thought I could feel the love
In you
But as you walked and passed me
My world became empty

I was sitting on the fence
Watching you disappear
With a love waiting by the corner
I cried out my heart
Cause I lost you to another forever.

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Beata Agustin December 3, 2024 at 7:34 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 3, 2016 at 11:05 PM Don, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Don El Yudo January 21, 2016 at 7:08 AM Great work of poetry. Checkout Don El Yudo's complete anthology titled "Love Cry" published in amazon createspace & kindle.

Don El Yudo January 21, 2016 at 7:06 AM Great work of poetry. Checkout Don El Yudo's complete anthology titled "Love Cry" published in amazon createspace & kindle.

Skat A January 12, 2016 at 12:09 PM wow, this is a great poem... Love it.... SKAT ...

Carol Sunshine Brown June 15, 2011 at 6:20 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Don. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol