Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Haiku

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Sitting On the Beach

sitting on the beach
I saw the ruby sun dive
into the deep blue

twilight was waiting
at the pause of destiny
sea birds called to night

moon came out glowing
upon the sun kissed waters
day's end charmed me so

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Sally Eslinger December 4, 2020 at 4:06 PM Sensual visual splendor. Put me right there with you. “...twilight waiting at the pause of destiny...”==Astounding perception! Oh wow! Evelyn Judy Buehler December 4, 2020 at 8:41 PM Thank you so much for your warm, supportive remarks. I'm so pleased at your enjoyment of my poem

Sara Kendrick December 2, 2020 at 2:28 PM Very descriptive work. Enjoyed reading today. Sara Evelyn Judy Buehler December 2, 2020 at 3:20 PM I'm so glad. Thank you. Evelyn

Alexis Y. December 2, 2020 at 2:27 PM Hi Evelyn, It felt as though as I was transported to the beach as well. And the scene was just breathtaking:-) Alexis Evelyn Judy Buehler December 2, 2020 at 3:19 PM Thank you indeed, for the smiles. :=)

Victor Buhagiar December 1, 2020 at 1:55 AM A string of worthwhile haikus. Well done. ~~ Evelyn Judy Buehler December 1, 2020 at 8:00 AM Thank you so much. :)

Carol Mays November 30, 2020 at 9:11 PM You had me at "ruby sun." OMG, absolutely gorgeous images follow. Definitely a favorite poem. Thank you! Evelyn Judy Buehler November 30, 2020 at 10:28 PM You are most welcome, Carol. I am quite happy and honored by your words. Blessings, Evelyn

Gershon Wolf November 30, 2020 at 4:58 PM Lovely images, Evelyn. Love those sun kissed waters. ~ Shady O'Grady Evelyn Judy Buehler November 30, 2020 at 6:44 PM How can one resist a beautiful sunset? Thank you for your appreciation of my poem. ~ Restless Ruby