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sitting on the beach I saw the ruby sun dive into the deep blue twilight was waiting at the pause of destiny sea birds called to night moon came out glowing upon the sun kissed waters day's end charmed me so

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Date: 12/4/2020 4:06:00 PM
Sensual visual splendor. Put me right there with you. “...twilight waiting at the pause of destiny...”==Astounding perception! Oh wow!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/4/2020 8:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for your warm, supportive remarks. I'm so pleased at your enjoyment of my poem
Date: 12/2/2020 2:28:00 PM
Very descriptive work. Enjoyed reading today. Sara
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/2/2020 3:20:00 PM
I'm so glad. Thank you. Evelyn
Date: 12/2/2020 2:27:00 PM
Hi Evelyn, It felt as though as I was transported to the beach as well. And the scene was just breathtaking:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/2/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thank you indeed, for the smiles. :=)
Date: 12/1/2020 1:55:00 AM
A string of worthwhile haikus. Well done. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/1/2020 8:00:00 AM
Thank you so much. :)
Date: 11/30/2020 9:11:00 PM
You had me at "ruby sun." OMG, absolutely gorgeous images follow. Definitely a favorite poem. Thank you!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/30/2020 10:28:00 PM
You are most welcome, Carol. I am quite happy and honored by your words. Blessings, Evelyn
Date: 11/30/2020 4:58:00 PM
Lovely images, Evelyn. Love those sun kissed waters. ~ Shady O'Grady
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/30/2020 6:44:00 PM
How can one resist a beautiful sunset? Thank you for your appreciation of my poem. ~ Restless Ruby