Sitting On Shore

Nice warm day
sitting on shore
with a line 
in the deep blue.
Sitting and seeing 
birds soar 
above the shore.
My heart is glad
as I enjoy
time with my lord
all alone .
I start to dream
of soaring so high above
with no care.
My line gets tight
as I engage
something from below the blue .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Onclaud Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 11:03 AM
a breezy piece with an ending that leaves one to make his own interpretation.. fine, fine write,michael.... :) huggs
Byte Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 4:31 PM
Thanks Nette for your comments this is my favorite thing to do go fish
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