Sit Beside Me In Silence

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Why don't we escape 
         all the chaos
    in this noisy world?
        For a fistful of 
     precious moments,
          let's just sit 
          side by side
       out in the open,
      completely silent.
   Let's gaze at the sky
       in the gloaming
        as it gradually 
         changes hue.
    Let's watch the day 
         age together,
          marveling
   at birds flying high,
      blades of grass
   waving in the wind.
          Join me in...
  this sweet surrender
         unperturbed;
       seeking respite
         in tranquility.
       Let's keep still
   like Buddhist monks,
        concentrating...
   on the lone goldfish
      on that fish tank
     inside our minds.


Submitted for...
Anacreontic Verse Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
Date written: 04/11/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 5/4/2021 10:41:00 AM
Lovely! Sometimes just being there without expressing anything expresses more powerfully!!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/4/2021 5:26:00 PM
Agreed, Smita! Thank you for the wonderful visit and comments:-)
Date: 5/1/2021 1:04:00 PM
Connie sums it all up perfectly -- tranquillity indeed! Nicely espoused, Edward. Best regards -- cheers! :) john P.s Love the quote!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/2/2021 5:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, John:-) Blessings.
Date: 4/18/2021 2:16:00 AM
I really enjoyed this lovely journey into tranquility Edward. Congratulations on your winning First placement my friend. I am saving this beauty to my faves! Blessings xxoo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/18/2021 3:39:00 AM
Thanks for the visit, wonderful comments and FAV, Connie:-) Most obliged.
Date: 4/12/2021 8:37:00 PM
To sit for a few minutes with a quiet mind’s priceless. Nicely done, Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/13/2021 2:26:00 AM
Thank you for the feedback and visit, Kim:-)
Date: 4/12/2021 2:14:00 PM
Excellent poem. It sounds so nice and brings much peace. Well done :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/12/2021 3:58:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-)
Date: 4/12/2021 12:53:00 PM
Hello Edward, yes it is good to quiet the mind. silence is good to listen to your thoughts. Blessings.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2021 10:25:00 AM
Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/12/2021 3:58:00 PM
Thanks for the FAV, Darlene:-) Most appreciated.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/12/2021 3:09:00 PM
Hello Edward, this will be my fav. Blessings my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/12/2021 1:42:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, comments and blessings, Darlene:-)
Date: 4/12/2021 5:56:00 AM
This is precious my friend invoking tranquility...silence is powerful! Great escape in your inspiring words.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/12/2021 7:01:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Vijay:-)
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