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Sister's Die

Under the hallow darkness of a November sky Final grace came to her with one final sigh Only the earthly robe is left now where she lie "Project U. F. O." contest

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/3/2013 8:07:00 AM

Very moving.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/2/2013 3:48:00 PM

Congratulation Tom A different and realistic entry to a theme that might take you anywhere. Well done SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2013 2:27:00 PM

this is very nice. I am really liking the ones that are not actually about UFO's. Congrats on your win.

John Posey

Date: 5/2/2013 11:17:00 AM

Somber, beautiful and deserving of the win.... Well done, my friend..... Jake

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/2/2013 12:18:00 AM

Many congrats Tom xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/1/2013 7:00:00 PM

Tom, congratulations in Robert's contest. ~LINDA

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/1/2013 5:51:00 PM

Congrats on your win~A.O

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/1/2013 5:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce

Robert Heemstra

Date: 5/1/2013 3:39:00 PM

Very sad and well written thank you.

Skat A

Date: 4/13/2013 1:52:00 PM

Tom, an excellent write all the way :-)! Much Love and respect ~*~ SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2013 11:57:00 AM

awe... poor sis... hope she really did not get beamed up..LOL... I like the project, is this a contest. Tom, I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA