Sister's Die

Under the hallow darkness of a November sky
Final grace came to her with one final sigh
Only the earthly robe is left now where she lie




"Project  U. F. O."     contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 8:07 AM
Very moving.
Delaney Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 3:48 PM
Congratulation Tom A different and realistic entry to a theme that might take you anywhere. Well done SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 2:27 PM
this is very nice. I am really liking the ones that are not actually about UFO's. Congrats on your win.
Posey Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Somber, beautiful and deserving of the win.... Well done, my friend..... Jake
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 12:18 AM
Many congrats Tom xx
A   Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Tom, congratulations in Robert's contest. ~LINDA
Oyewole Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 5:51 PM
Congrats on your win~A.O
Johnson Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 5:31 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce
Heemstra Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Very sad and well written thank you.
A  Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 1:52 PM
Tom, an excellent write all the way :-)! Much Love and respect ~*~ SKAT
A   Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 11:57 AM
awe... poor sis... hope she really did not get beamed up..LOL... I like the project, is this a contest. Tom, I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA
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