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Sidney spots spiteful sister Sarah secretly sucking sticky strawberry swirls, and sarsaparilla spirals Tongue Twister Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joe Sandler 12/30/20

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/1/2021 2:15:00 PM

Great tongue twister. You make it seem easy. I know better.

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/1/2021 8:57:00 AM

Read it three times real fast. I couldn't, Great tongue twister Jan!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/31/2020 6:50:00 PM

I got stuck on 'and.' lol. G.L. in the contest, Jan, and best wishes for the year ahead. ~ From Across the Pond, gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2020 5:48:00 PM

awesome, jan. I gave one with lots of S's too, an oldie I had buried somewhere on here!!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/31/2020 10:55:00 AM

"Practise makes perfect!" Will she grow up to be a teaser or a pleaser? Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! Aloha! Rico

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/31/2020 10:20:00 AM

such fun, jan! i'm so glad the powers-that-be didn't censor your title...

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/31/2020 2:04:00 AM

Soon I will lose my "S" Happy New Year. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 12/31/2020 4:41:00 AM

thanks for dropping by my friend so happy to see you are a PM once again:-) hugs Jan xx

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/30/2020 8:07:00 PM

A lovely tongue twister, Jan!! Wish you a Vey Happy New Year!!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/31/2020 4:40:00 AM

Thanks Newton, Happy New year:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/30/2020 1:37:00 PM

Oh that is delightful tongue twisting! Sweet ink! Happy New Year Lovely! xomo <3

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2020 2:04:00 PM

Thanks for all your supportive comments over the year Mo:-) happy new year:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/30/2020 1:33:00 PM

Good tongue twister Jan, sister Sarah sucks.:-) Hugs, Belle xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2020 2:03:00 PM

that's one of the lines i omitted!! there are 3 other lines but i thought it may be too long and sister Sarah sucks was the final line lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/30/2020 1:29:00 PM

Lol, thats a mouthful Jan, great alliteration. Hope you and the family have a very happy and healthy New year. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2020 1:33:00 PM

Thanks Tom, the initial poem was much longer but I've shortened it and hope less is more foe the contest:-) Lets hope for better things in 2021, this year has been so surreal in so many ways:-( hugs jan xx