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Sister Sarah Sucks

Sidney spots spiteful sister Sarah secretly sucking
sticky strawberry swirls, and sarsaparilla spirals 

Tongue Twister Challenge Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Joe Sandler

12/30/20

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Caren Krutsinger

January 1, 2021 at 2:15 PM

Great tongue twister. You make it seem easy. I know better.

Mark Koplin

January 1, 2021 at 8:57 AM

Read it three times real fast. I couldn't, Great tongue twister Jan!

Gershon Wolf

December 31, 2020 at 6:50 PM

I got stuck on 'and.' lol. G.L. in the contest, Jan, and best wishes for the year ahead. ~ From Across the Pond, gw

Andrea Dietrich

December 31, 2020 at 5:48 PM

awesome, jan. I gave one with lots of S's too, an oldie I had buried somewhere on here!!

Rico Leffanta

December 31, 2020 at 10:55 AM

"Practise makes perfect!" Will she grow up to be a teaser or a pleaser? Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! Aloha! Rico

Ilene Bauer

December 31, 2020 at 10:20 AM

such fun, jan! i'm so glad the powers-that-be didn't censor your title...

Panagiota Romios

December 31, 2020 at 3:58 AM

Your cleverness simply amazes me! Watching international fireworks as I always do. Midnight takes forever to get to the USA Always, Pangie Xxx

Jan Allison

December 31, 2020 at 4:42 AM

I dont think there are displays here this year, the sometimes do on in the capital but there are major roadworks so i dont think it will happen, am not a fan of new year, just so glad to see the back of this one though:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

December 31, 2020 at 2:04 AM

Soon I will lose my "S" Happy New Year. ~~

Jan Allison

December 31, 2020 at 4:41 AM

thanks for dropping by my friend so happy to see you are a PM once again:-) hugs Jan xx

Newton Ranaweera

December 30, 2020 at 8:07 PM

A lovely tongue twister, Jan!! Wish you a Vey Happy New Year!!

Jan Allison

December 31, 2020 at 4:40 AM

Thanks Newton, Happy New year:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 30, 2020 at 1:37 PM

Oh that is delightful tongue twisting! Sweet ink! Happy New Year Lovely! xomo <3

Jan Allison

December 30, 2020 at 2:04 PM

Thanks for all your supportive comments over the year Mo:-) happy new year:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds

December 30, 2020 at 1:33 PM

Good tongue twister Jan, sister Sarah sucks.:-) Hugs, Belle xx

Jan Allison

December 30, 2020 at 2:03 PM

that's one of the lines i omitted!! there are 3 other lines but i thought it may be too long and sister Sarah sucks was the final line lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

December 30, 2020 at 1:29 PM

Lol, thats a mouthful Jan, great alliteration. Hope you and the family have a very happy and healthy New year. Tom

Jan Allison

December 30, 2020 at 1:33 PM

Thanks Tom, the initial poem was much longer but I've shortened it and hope less is more foe the contest:-) Lets hope for better things in 2021, this year has been so surreal in so many ways:-( hugs jan xx

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