Sirens of the Ocean

Under the ocean where King Neptune rules,
multiple species of fish form schools.
The most fantastical fish you'll ever see,
is a mermaid in her long-haired glory.

Sirens of the sea are they,
their voices one with the ocean waves.
Half human with a fish's tail,
they appear to watch the ships that sail.

Known for their beauty and seductive ways,
their lives consist of frolic and play.
Sailors beware their beckoning cries,
pouting lips and sorrowful sighs.

Don't give in to their playful allure.
You'll regret it, that's for sure.
For if you join them in the sea,
they'll keep you with them indefinitely.

They'll play with you until they tire,
then leave you to King Neptune's ire.
So if you see a mermaid fair,
Enjoy the view but do take care.

11/7/15
For Julia Ward's Fantasy Fish in a Fantasy Ocean contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:21 AM
How lovely Kim.. congrats on fine win!
A  Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:33 AM
Kim, congrats on your HM win. SKAT
Merryman Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Thank you, SKAT!
Ward Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:24 AM
Thank you for your entry and well done, Kim.
Merryman Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Thank you for the HM, Julia!
Zubair Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 1:47 PM
The way aquatic beings mannerisms conjoured up in a ring of emotions deserves plaudit
Merryman Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 9:09 PM
Thank you, Samiha!
Shaw Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 9:56 AM
Hi Kim, Such a lovely, fantastical poem you have penned. The perfect theme for the contest. Best of luck! Hugs, Kim xx
Merryman Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 9:09 PM
Thank you so much, Kim!
Johnson Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 4:39 PM
A great write, a should be winner babe, good luck with the judge xox
Merryman Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Thank you, Don! Appreciate it!
La France Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 3:52 PM
Kim this is a winner for sure just so beautifully penned
Merryman Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:29 PM
Thank you so much, Constance!
Muideen Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 2:31 PM
wow! Am glad to read my friend your wonderful write got my attention. excellent piece.............A.M
Merryman Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Afolabi! I'm glad you liked it!
Tor Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Beautiful write Kim enjoyed reading about your mermaid. Excellent entry for the contest.
Merryman Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Michael! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Barchettadrive Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 10:08 PM
Kim! This is a fantastic poem with great advice to boot! Who could ask for more? Thanks for reading MY mind! :)
Merryman Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 7:24 PM
Thank you, Red! I'm so glad you liked it!
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