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Sirens of the Ocean

Under the ocean where King Neptune rules, multiple species of fish form schools. The most fantastical fish you'll ever see, is a mermaid in her long-haired glory. Sirens of the sea are they, their voices one with the ocean waves. Half human with a fish's tail, they appear to watch the ships that sail. Known for their beauty and seductive ways, their lives consist of frolic and play. Sailors beware their beckoning cries, pouting lips and sorrowful sighs. Don't give in to their playful allure. You'll regret it, that's for sure. For if you join them in the sea, they'll keep you with them indefinitely. They'll play with you until they tire, then leave you to King Neptune's ire. So if you see a mermaid fair, Enjoy the view but do take care. 11/7/15 For Julia Ward's Fantasy Fish in a Fantasy Ocean contest.

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Date: 12/7/2015 12:21:00 AM
How lovely Kim.. congrats on fine win!
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:33:00 AM
Kim, congrats on your HM win. SKAT
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Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT!
Date: 12/6/2015 11:24:00 AM
Thank you for your entry and well done, Kim.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:57:00 PM
Thank you for the HM, Julia!
Date: 11/21/2015 1:47:00 PM
The way aquatic beings mannerisms conjoured up in a ring of emotions deserves plaudit
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:09:00 PM
Thank you, Samiha!
Date: 11/15/2015 9:56:00 AM
Hi Kim, Such a lovely, fantastical poem you have penned. The perfect theme for the contest. Best of luck! Hugs, Kim xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim!
Date: 11/8/2015 4:39:00 PM
A great write, a should be winner babe, good luck with the judge xox
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:30:00 PM
Thank you, Don! Appreciate it!
Date: 11/8/2015 3:52:00 PM
Kim this is a winner for sure just so beautifully penned
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance!
Date: 11/8/2015 2:31:00 PM
wow! Am glad to read my friend your wonderful write got my attention. excellent piece.............A.M
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, Afolabi! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 11/8/2015 2:16:00 PM
Beautiful write Kim enjoyed reading about your mermaid. Excellent entry for the contest.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, Michael! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 11/7/2015 10:08:00 PM
Kim! This is a fantastic poem with great advice to boot! Who could ask for more? Thanks for reading MY mind! :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 11/13/2015 7:24:00 PM
Thank you, Red! I'm so glad you liked it!

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