Siren - A

Helpless, hapless soul laid bare and rent asunder by haunting vocals ------------------- (C) John C Michaels, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 5:16 PM
A siren's haunting call just can't be resisted! Who knows how many men (and women?) have fallen victim to a siren's allure! Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 9:16 PM
someone out to sea where the sirens be!! Cool haiku
Sietesantos Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 6:51 AM
John, I bow to you! This is hauntingly beautiful! Bravo, my friend!
Michaels Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 8:15 AM
Thanks once again for the lovely comments. I'm so glad you liked it!!
Andresen Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 5:37 AM
- John, a very good haiku - // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 6:44 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. I've got another version floating around; I'll try and upload this as "B" at some point!
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