Sir Who

Sir Who He's not a pastor but he has a congregation proves wicked changing faces His ploy, paint lives with gloom, judgement, ridicule and tragedy but the crafter of this ill will wants his portrait kept out of those equations They think they know, unaware and oblivious to the truth in burdensome weight of his misconstrued calculations.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Ray Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 10:15 PM
what worries me in this poem is a blind congregation, but on closer analysis, I wonder if the congregation is not a mirror of the dreaded self-portrait....and those are my thoughts....
M. Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 12:23 AM
Okay
Griffiths Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:03 AM
I like how long the last line is, like it is itself "burdensome".
M. Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 2:15 AM
Thanks Terry
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